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I think you're story was great! I actually though at first that it was about you, but then I realized it was just a story. You're writing was really good because I was really intrigued while I was reading it.  

I can relate to Dodie Smith. When I was little I wanted to be an actress, but as I am growing up I feel like that's the impossible. But as people say nothing is impossible so I'm not sure to give up or not.

I really like how you format it to like a journal entry. The story was really good! I definitely enjoyed it!

I also like to be on my bed with no lights only the lamp by my bed and with no glasses. Just having the book up close with no glare from the glasses frame is the best!

I agree, I think when we talk about negative things it makes things more negative. For instance, if we are gossiping about a rumor is would then spread somehow making it more of a big deal that it already wasn't. It might lead use sad or even upset, so yes I do believe if we talk about negative things it will give it too much power and can affect us in a harmful way.

I really like the story, it reminds me of AP Psychology when we watch a movie about a doctor trying to help the patient. 

That's a really interesting question. I also had that question as well like what is my purpose and why I am here. Am I suppose to seek my purpose or am I suppose to wait for my purpose to appear in front of me. I ask those questions sometimes though it becomes to deep and I can't find the answers to that, so I stop seeking or the answer and go with the flow. 

Your dream is very interesting. If I had that dream I would be to scared to even try to walk back in the house, but I'm also curious as to whether had happen to that little boy. 

I really like your Haiku, I wish that was me right now just sleeping for a very long time. 

I really like this, it's very meaningful and very deep. My favorite line is "Today, I stand up to this oligarchy. I use words instead of strength."